Hello,
good morning, I'm Judith and now I will talk about an issue that
affects us all, the issue is unemployment. To begin I wil explain to
you what is unemployment and after I will explain the causes of this
situation.
What
is unemployment? Well, unemployment is the lack of work and wages,
and with this word has come to our ears the word “crisis”.
In
these last years we heve seen how Sapin has increased its numer of
unemployed and goes into bankruptcy thanks to poor political
management. The lack of work and money has made that there is a great
social unrest. Every day there are some demostrations to protest
against no action haveing taken by the government. The families are
suffering because at least one of two components that brings money to
the family is now unemployed. This is really bad for the country
because, I think that the population will go on decline, because the
families haven't money to hold, in to feed or to educate their
children, therefore people will stop having children.
Actually
this “crisis” affects many areas, for example: education and
health service.
In
education, every time there are more students in the same class and I
think that is an error because after arise problems as it explained
the last day Pau, because the education is really bad.
And
in health service, the problems are serious too, because they are
clossing a lot of operations rooms and this makes the waiting lists
grows longer and longer and people are dying before surgery.
Back
to the topic of unemployment, in Sapin the comunities which are more
affected are: Andalucia, Catalonia, Comunitat Valenciana and
Comunidad de Madrid. And sectors more afected are: construction,
administration, manufacturing and retail shops. Actually unemployment
arrives at 27% of Spain, I think that is a truly alarming number and
I hope this government puts a solution soon, because the future of
new generations will become worse. I think it will be terrible for
us, and worse to our children if we don't get a solution. Salaries
are becoming smaller and every time there are more and more people on
the streets because they have been driven away from their homes.
Well
to summerize all these ideas I want to show this foto: ¿Crisis?
¿Tú has visto a algún banquero en la cola del paro o a algún
ejecutivo rebuscando en las basuras? Los pobres soys más pobres y
punto. I think that this is
really what the ploiticans are doing whith us. They try to get richer
through people's sacrifice.
SELF EVALUATION
Presentation (10%)
In this presentation I use different resourses, for example: Prezzi, images and a little information included in the prezzi, that supports a lot of my presentation, because it helps other students to understand better what you are saying in your presentation. The imagies make the presentation more fluent and entertaining. (10%)
Body lenguage and eye contact (10%)
I try to look and focus my eyes at two or three people or ty not to look at the ground. When you look at the public, you connect with people and they listen to you. Sometimes I look at the paper to remember some things and in some interventions I point out some thing of this work. (10%)
Structure (10%)
I organized my presentation with a logical structure: the introduction, the global information and finally the conclusions. The sentences were short and easy to understand and I used conectors to link sentences and phrases. If you have a good organization, you can understand better the presentation. (8%)
Content (40%)
The objective of this work was to introduce and teach new information about unemployment. I think that, this objective was fulfilled. The images helped us understand the information and the message was clear. I hope that the information that I have provided has been useful to know a little more about unemployment. (30%)
Language (20%)
I think that, the grammar and vocabulary was correct and comprehensible. I use some connectors that have given fluency to text. (15%)
Pronunciacion and intonation (10%)
I hope that my pronuntiation was good, clear, comprehensible and quite fluent. I made some mistakes, but I think this is quite normal. (8%)
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