Oral Presentation: Unemployment

Hello, good morning, I'm Judith and now I will talk about an issue that affects us all, the issue is unemployment. To begin I wil explain to you what is unemployment and after I will explain the causes of this situation.

What is unemployment? Well, unemployment is the lack of work and wages, and with this word has come to our ears the word “crisis”.

In these last years we heve seen how Sapin has increased its numer of unemployed and goes into bankruptcy thanks to poor political management. The lack of work and money has made that there is a great social unrest. Every day there are some demostrations to protest against no action haveing taken by the government. The families are suffering because at least one of two components that brings money to the family is now unemployed. This is really bad for the country because, I think that the population will go on decline, because the families haven't money to hold, in to feed or to educate their children, therefore people will stop having children.

Actually this “crisis” affects many areas, for example: education and health service.

In education, every time there are more students in the same class and I think that is an error because after arise problems as it explained the last day Pau, because the education is really bad.

And in health service, the problems are serious too, because they are clossing a lot of operations rooms and this makes the waiting lists grows longer and longer and people are dying before surgery.

Back to the topic of unemployment, in Sapin the comunities which are more affected are: Andalucia, Catalonia, Comunitat Valenciana and Comunidad de Madrid. And sectors more afected are: construction, administration, manufacturing and retail shops. Actually unemployment arrives at 27% of Spain, I think that is a truly alarming number and I hope this government puts a solution soon, because the future of new generations will become worse. I think it will be terrible for us, and worse to our children if we don't get a solution. Salaries are becoming smaller and every time there are more and more people on the streets because they have been driven away from their homes.

Well to summerize all these ideas I want to show this foto: ¿Crisis? ¿Tú has visto a algún banquero en la cola del paro o a algún ejecutivo rebuscando en las basuras? Los pobres soys más pobres y punto. I think that this is really what the ploiticans are doing whith us. They try to get richer through people's sacrifice.

SELF EVALUATION

 Presentation (10%)

In this presentation I use different resourses, for example: Prezzi, images and a little information included in the prezzi, that supports a lot of my presentation, because it helps other students to understand better what you are saying in your presentation. The imagies make the presentation more fluent and entertaining. (10%)

Body lenguage and eye contact (10%)

I try to look and focus my eyes at two or three people or ty not to look at the ground. When you look at the public, you connect with people and they listen to you. Sometimes I look at the paper to remember some things and in some interventions I point out some thing of this work. (10%)

Structure (10%)

I organized my presentation with a logical structure: the introduction, the global information and finally the conclusions. The sentences were short and easy to understand and I used conectors to link sentences and phrases.  If you have a good organization, you can understand better the presentation. (8%)

Content (40%)

The objective of this work was to introduce and teach new information about unemployment. I think that, this objective was fulfilled. The images helped us understand the information and the message was clear. I hope that the information that I have provided has been useful to know a little more about unemployment. (30%)

Language (20%)

I think that, the grammar and vocabulary was correct and comprehensible. I use some connectors that have given fluency to text. (15%)

Pronunciacion and intonation (10%)

I hope that my pronuntiation was good, clear, comprehensible and quite fluent. I made some mistakes, but I think this is quite normal. (8%)

FINAL MARK 8.1

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